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PostSubject: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeTue Nov 17, 2009 8:11 pm

Hi there, I am new here and this is my first long animation i made.
http://www.filebox.me/view/4q349bcv2
Watch it, rate it and comment it.
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 18, 2009 11:02 am

Haha that awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 18, 2009 8:38 pm

I like that! Love the jumping spin-kick!

Work on the stickman look... It could be better... But your style reminds me of Hyun!
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 18, 2009 8:45 pm

thanks for the comments
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 19, 2009 8:27 pm

Lol, nice humour you've got there.

But he moves around a bit too much, as though he's got ADHD.

I loved the easing you put onto your punch, but do you use mouse? cause your stivk construction is a bit off...


Keep it up!
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 19, 2009 10:15 pm

Yes Kieran i use the mouse, and its kind of hard because the cursor moves a bit when i am drawing. Anyway thanks for the comment.
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeSat Nov 21, 2009 11:05 pm

Here is my first attempt at a background
http://www.filebox.me/view/s6njqj2yt
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeSun Nov 22, 2009 2:01 pm

Pretty nice, but you may want to add some shading to make it look better.

Have a look at this tutorial: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/288242

And then look at this animation: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/430500 (right click and press play to stop it and STUDY the background!)
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeSun Nov 22, 2009 4:30 pm

Thanks for the tutorial. Here's what i made:
http://www.filebox.me/view/5jva0p30f
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeSun Nov 22, 2009 5:53 pm

Thats pretty smexi, I love the shading on the stone and the bush, but the bit on the grass wasn't too appealing. Maybe make it less of a contrast ? Or maybe only do a few reeds, but make them a bit fatter and more detailed.

Detail is crucial but only where its needed. Don't overdo it.

Also, make the shadin more realistic. For example, there would be a slightly darker patch behind the stone, not a lighter one.

Good luck!
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeSun Nov 22, 2009 7:16 pm

Ok I'l see what I can do.
Edit:Here it is:
http://www.filebox.me/view/97aefiei6
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeMon Nov 23, 2009 4:29 pm

nice backflip :O :O ! TEACH MERH :D ur totally awesome dude :D i think you remind me of hyun too :3
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeMon Nov 23, 2009 7:41 pm

Now that is starting to look sexy!
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeMon Nov 23, 2009 9:02 pm

Good. I think I'l start a animation on that.
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 09, 2009 8:42 am

I haven't been posting nothing lately because i practised. Here is a test:
http://www.filebox.me/view/zmzpfsfm9
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 09, 2009 2:35 pm

oh man you really improved :) good work
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 09, 2009 10:24 pm

and this is my first attempt at a beam
http://www.filebox.me/view/afxcgpjev
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 11, 2009 3:53 pm

the new thing is good
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PostSubject: Re: First long animation   First long animation I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 11, 2009 4:19 pm

Thanks
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